Friday, March 10, 2017

My juicy red apple...
I was looking at my red shiny apple,
It felt as cold as a ice cube.
I put my apple close to my ear,
I tried to peel it with longish nails.
It made a like a fizzing sound like a fizzy drink,
I gazed at my polished apple one more time.
I took a small bite like it was bitten by a mouse,
I took another bite and it was bigger.
I took a few more big bites,
all you can see was the brown and white seeds.

That was how my apple got gobbled up!

1 comment:

  1. Hello Reitu
    My name is Ofa and I am a year 7 student at Panmure Bridge School. I really like how you have focused on your work and put an hard effort into this piece of work. I like the how you have described apple as shiny. I really like the interesting words you have put in your work like gazed and polished. Well done keep up the great work!